The sequence illustrates the harrowing story of "Trace," a juvenile green who came to the center missing a front flipper. It's meant to show how Trace got tangled up in discarded fishing line and lost his flipper to traumatic amputation. Right now, it just seems a bit too slow and "meh" to me.
Suffice it to say I'm still tweaking the segment but I think the bare bones of the concept are there.
Well, I'm headed back to the editing board...just thought you might like a "sneak peek" at what's going on.
Cheers,
-RW